There wasn't anything that would make this stick out for me as non-British (I was prepared for there to be some small things after the author's notes) and I simply sank my teeth in it during the reading; it was very delightful to read this and I could easily imagine this playing out in life as it read. It was glorious in its delightfulness and the smaller details really helped sell it - such as River tossing a letter because they didn't get her name right.
There was a nice level of 'something's not right' when Amy thought she could see her doll nodding back. When reading this, it made me ask 'what's going on?' and I like when small details in a story make me do that.
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Date: 17 Jul 2010 11:11 pm (UTC)There was a nice level of 'something's not right' when Amy thought she could see her doll nodding back. When reading this, it made me ask 'what's going on?' and I like when small details in a story make me do that.