FIC progress: Substitute

So, this total crack AU fic that I started (part one here), in which Amy wakes up and discovers Eleven and River are her parents (somehow) . . . I'm thinking it's gonna become something quite big and complicated.  Thing is, I love getting feedback and questions as I write (I've already gotten ideas from some of the comments on the first part--thanks, guys!), but I also want to be able to go back, change things and rearrange things as I go along.  So I don't think the usual LJ practice of posting consecutive sections until the whole thing is finished is going to work out here.  I am going, therefore, to attempt a probably foolish experiment, in which I put up the bits that I've worked on.  They may get changed later.  They may not end up in this order.  I may trash them altogether.  We'll see.

If you're willing to put up with that kind of crazy, I'd very much appreciate thoughts, questions, britpicks, etc.

ETA: many thanks to stick_poker  for a britpick.



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