Oh, good. I loved her from the get go, but I feel like we lost sight of her some in the middle. I think she works well in a more fantastical setting.
I agree. Her 'life doesn't quite make sense' and that's the best part about her, which you tap into here. I love how you turned everything from last series on its head and made her father into the imaginary friend. It fits with how 'things are never entirely forgotten' lol. Yes, this really could work in series 6 -- send it to the Moff!
That's why I wrote a bonus bathroom cleaning scene in the comments, because a day without Doctor/River banter is like a day without sunshine ;-)
I swear River/Doctor is the reason I'm single at the moment! I want that type of relationship (so kinda dumped the very sweet but boring bloke who took me for a nice meal after the DW finale ... everything he said and did just paled in comparison to that last little scene when the Doc almost proposed at the end lol!)
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Oh, good. I loved her from the get go, but I feel like we lost sight of her some in the middle. I think she works well in a more fantastical setting.
I agree. Her 'life doesn't quite make sense' and that's the best part about her, which you tap into here. I love how you turned everything from last series on its head and made her father into the imaginary friend. It fits with how 'things are never entirely forgotten' lol. Yes, this really could work in series 6 -- send it to the Moff!
That's why I wrote a bonus bathroom cleaning scene in the comments, because a day without Doctor/River banter is like a day without sunshine ;-)
I swear River/Doctor is the reason I'm single at the moment! I want that type of relationship (so kinda dumped the very sweet but boring bloke who took me for a nice meal after the DW finale ... everything he said and did just paled in comparison to that last little scene when the Doc almost proposed at the end lol!)