I love everything about this, but I especially enjoy how you slip in bits that remind us that this isn't quite right, they're meant to be somewhere else as something else. It's not subtle, but it fits perfectly within the flow of the story and seems absolutely natural, and it's hard to manage that (at least for me). This is made of win!
I am going, therefore, to attempt a probably foolish experiment, in which I put up the bits that I've worked on. They may get changed later. They may not end up in this order. I may trash them altogether. We'll see.
Also: ^great idea! I approve, though I may be biased because I can hardly wait for more. XD
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I love everything about this, but I especially enjoy how you slip in bits that remind us that this isn't quite right, they're meant to be somewhere else as something else. It's not subtle, but it fits perfectly within the flow of the story and seems absolutely natural, and it's hard to manage that (at least for me). This is made of win!
I am going, therefore, to attempt a probably foolish experiment, in which I put up the bits that I've worked on. They may get changed later. They may not end up in this order. I may trash them altogether. We'll see.
Also: ^great idea! I approve, though I may be biased because I can hardly wait for more. XD