This is gorgeous! Bahaha, River and the Doctor as Amy's parents, that would either be the best or the worst childhood ever. I love the little details that draw us readers into the world (cinnamon and burn marks on the ceiling = love!) and (and this may just be something I picked up that isn't there at all) there seems to be something a little dark, with the end and the possibly-moving Augustus doll, lying just under the surface. Which is my absolutely favoritest thing ever!

I would very much like to see this continued. ;)