Oh yeah, I agree that the story is kind of a bare outline - I figured out my problem with LKH is that it feels more like a hasty sketch, and not a fully realized piece of work. I think it REALLY would have benefited from being two episodes, or if we'd at least got another episode with Melody Pond.

Olivia's story is so Moffatty it makes me wonder if JJ Abrams is a Doctor Who fan, or if they're hiding him back there somewhere.