Oh my god, this was PERFECT! I just loved your Ponds here, they were priceless. You got their voices perfectly, your Rory was especially brilliant - I can't believe I missed how funny he can be, but now I feel like it was obvious all along in his character, thinking back. So yeah, I missed a whole part of the character - we'll see things positively and say that YOUR FIC made me see the character in a new way. The way you used the wildlife metaphors was adorable, so hilarious. Loved Amy's comment about adjusting his jacket right off, Rory's about getting nuzzle-y, the bet, and River liking bugs that breathe fire - EVERYTHING =) it was delightful!