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promethia_tenk ([personal profile] promethia_tenk) wrote 2010-11-08 10:30 pm (UTC)

Radioactive ladybug bite.

Oh, and I eat my greens <3

Oh, my god. Your River voice. Her voice! I can hear her voice so well in this.
Thank you so much. That is deeply reassuring.

I love when anyone talks about Gallifreyan, and the little nuances of language, and River learning it...wonderful!
Lol, I'm glad you liked it. Actually, were you the one who appreciated the silly tense I made up in one of my fics once? I seem to remember that. Is this an area of study for you?

It's a bit unfair to River, really, because the declension system in Old High Gallifreyan is a beast (highly simplified in the modern language), and it's not like the Doctor doesn't get it wrong half the time himself. But let's say she got some good sex out of playing mock-hurt at the teasing ;-)

And the ending, such a beautiful and tender relationship, but you make it so subtle (his little smile, her winding him up). Oh, this was too good. Brilliant!
This is good to hear. I worried about that ending being too subtle, too easy to misinterpret, a little too cold, etc. It's a tricky balance when everything's being implied.

Thanks so much for the lovely comment.

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